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DrBreadgun

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Your audio is way too loud. I mean... WAY TOO LOUD. Even if I turn it down it's still too loud

But excuse me for sounding like a jerk. But random screaming doesn't appeal to anyone.

You could've added more to 0:05 like him looking at a world map and there is a part where he talks/mumbles at 0:15 where you could've added something.

It seems like this was rushed and you didn't put enough effort into it.

Again I'm sorry for sounding like an asshole - there isn't an easier way to put this.

TheRandomTom16 responds:

ok thanks :)

Hehe! Great animation! Well meme'd my friend!

The very fast pace accompanied abrupt endings would make me laugh so hard.

MarcyVF responds:

yay

I actually liked this style a lot!

That tag tho

dylan responds:

"drifting throught the wind
wanting to start again
do you ever feel"

- beyoncé, 2010

Nice background!

HottestCornDong responds:

Thank you, I decided to up the quality a little in this one.

Some Compliments:

- Love the style of the hands moving objects on the scene.

- Great stage focus. (You don't have your viewers confused on what to look at on the screen - which is good)

- The exaggeration of the irony at the end was great.

- Did you do the voices by yourself? If you did you did a great job masking your own voice.

Some Criticism (Constructive):

- Your audio quality is weird. Go into flash's Publish Settings and change both "Audio Stream" and "Audio Event" to "Speech, 44kHz, Mono" (Be aware this takes up more space on your PC if you are cautious of that.)

- If you believe your backgrounds fit your style that's great. Personally I like more detailed backgrounds but hey! Maybe your viewers think differently - this is just my opinion.

- It's obvious that you are erasing the arms and redrawing them. If you could find a way to eliminate this problem it would be more visually appealing. (Such as redrawing the whole body instead of just the arm - to give more life as well)

Anyway, this kind of content is something I'd appreciate seeing on the portal! :)

Keep up the good work, Austin!

[3.5 stars]

- Breadgun

(I'm a fan of your work now lmao)

HottestCornDong responds:

Thank you for the info! I was wondering why the audio was sounding a bit strange, but now I know thanks to you! Knowing that you are a fan of my work makes me really happy because it gives me something to look forward to everyday! (by that i mean seeing how I can get better by people like you leaving great feedback!)

Thanks again!

-Austin

It's such a terrible joke I love it!

I'm not trying to be mean, I'm trying to help you out here..
But, the animation looks like it has no heart or soul into it, you need to work on it..
Also, don't really post old animations...

lamgelus responds:

i will improve in the future if you want to check my latest work, please follow me, thanks for your comment

I feel your pain bro.

Dat cube world refernce. I fell ya buddy

Age 23, Male

Animating & Chill

Probably somewhere

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