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It was great, I'd definitely watch the future ones and I remember watching the first... or prequel one and enjoying that one..

Although...

The bridge scene could've used more work, everything seemed bland, you could've...

- Added a wind sound effect to exaggerate the speed
- Blur the city in the background and the bridge's wires to show speed.
- Different car designs.

All in all, it was really good.

But I caught the "Sulbawah" sound effect like, three times. Please refrain from using this particular sound affect more than once in such a short interval of time.

I've never seen an artstyle like this.. EVER

But.. It's. Amazing. I can't really explain it but overall it's.. GOOD!

Conglaturations

AmazinLarry responds:

Thank you!!

Holy shit, the whole video is a animated vlog!

Damn, the amount of effort put into ten minutes!

A weird feeling that's... Nice?

I'm sorry but, Edd's a great guy and all and inspired most of us in some way shape or form, but please create your own artstyle.

TTanimations responds:

Okay. Here's my explaination. Why it looks like edd 'n' shit. I'm currently in the part where I'm looking which animation style I should use. This is my 4th animation I made, ever. And it's not that easy to make an artstyle when you can't even do that great of a job using another persons artstyle. So chances are I will change my art style in the next few animations. Nothing's really final, and it's hard enough to work on ipad. So I don't really know if this style is my artstyle or if another one is, or if I will do stickman, or another type. Pretty much I'm just testing to see what type is good for me. Idk if I'll even continue. But all I know is that I like to do short animations but really I don't care what happens. So whatever, if it's my final artstyle you'll just have to deal with it. But atleast it's not my OLD, OLD animations http://youtu.be/f17_NmdLl-I

You shouldn't post things on newgrounds which are seemly made frame-by-frame with MS paint and a handy movie-maker. You work looks lifeless due to the lack of proper framerate and frames in general and at times I'm confused on what's happening.

Also, it doesn't matter if your young, it'll count if you lack experience. If you are under 13 then you shouldn't have signed up for Newgrounds for you /must/ be at the age or above.

Just to assure you based on your comment - I'm not being rude this is a legitimate review with constructive criticism. There really isn't an easier way to explain.

TheCrazyH responds:

You make a good point. I'll download flash soon.

If this was a real thing I'd totally give some money just to brag about it for doing something stupid..

I loved the way you developed this commercial as well!

sadakab responds:

Hahaha thanks a lot man!

Hehe, this is very good!

I like the style and the detail you put in to compensate for lack of colors.

Lipsyncing could use some work though.

Greg-Vazquez responds:

Thanks! I was up late coming up with this, so I wasn't as thorough. Gonna try to improve on it for the next one.

The combo's were very nice, although I thought the final punch could be executed better and the movements after 0:06 are too fast and could've been smoother.

All and all it's great!

Although, from what I've seen and heard - Newgrounds isn't the best place to showcase stick figure animations.

Go onto http://www.hyunsdojo.com - a place where stick figure animation is greatly praised.

You'll fit in perfectly. :)

Age 23, Male

Animating & Chill

Probably somewhere

Joined on 7/7/12

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