[+] Great atmosphere
[+] Tron-ish music, love itt!
[+] Color scheme as good
[-] Animation looked flawed in areas
[-] Hard to tell what's going on during the fight scene
[+] Great atmosphere
[+] Tron-ish music, love itt!
[+] Color scheme as good
[-] Animation looked flawed in areas
[-] Hard to tell what's going on during the fight scene
Yeah the problem is that I was working on and off this for a while so some parts are pretty dated where I was still trying to get on my feet with the style. To be expected from a pilot but I can totally accept that it looks off in areas, thanks!
This style is amazing! I love everything about it. But I'm a real fan of "choppy, but smooth" style.
Fantastic! Thanks! Our stuff will be right up your alley then! :)
Agreeing with Jonarock down there as well as that I will like to see more in the future as well. To be brutally honest, the humor never hit me once.
It's more of a children's animation and this wasn't focused to be humours. We've written many other episodes and some have lots of humor. This episode and 2 after this will be more of a "Get to know the characters". Thank you for your review though!
Is Disgust dead now?
Have we gone to far???//??
go away
Concept was decent, you could've done a good job on masking you voice better, for everyone sounds very similar. But I like your artstyle a lot!
Thanks Man ;)
I've never seen an artstyle like this.. EVER
But.. It's. Amazing. I can't really explain it but overall it's.. GOOD!
Conglaturations
Thank you!!
I'm sorry but, Edd's a great guy and all and inspired most of us in some way shape or form, but please create your own artstyle.
Okay. Here's my explaination. Why it looks like edd 'n' shit. I'm currently in the part where I'm looking which animation style I should use. This is my 4th animation I made, ever. And it's not that easy to make an artstyle when you can't even do that great of a job using another persons artstyle. So chances are I will change my art style in the next few animations. Nothing's really final, and it's hard enough to work on ipad. So I don't really know if this style is my artstyle or if another one is, or if I will do stickman, or another type. Pretty much I'm just testing to see what type is good for me. Idk if I'll even continue. But all I know is that I like to do short animations but really I don't care what happens. So whatever, if it's my final artstyle you'll just have to deal with it. But atleast it's not my OLD, OLD animations http://youtu.be/f17_NmdLl-I
You shouldn't post things on newgrounds which are seemly made frame-by-frame with MS paint and a handy movie-maker. You work looks lifeless due to the lack of proper framerate and frames in general and at times I'm confused on what's happening.
Also, it doesn't matter if your young, it'll count if you lack experience. If you are under 13 then you shouldn't have signed up for Newgrounds for you /must/ be at the age or above.
Just to assure you based on your comment - I'm not being rude this is a legitimate review with constructive criticism. There really isn't an easier way to explain.
You make a good point. I'll download flash soon.
If this was a real thing I'd totally give some money just to brag about it for doing something stupid..
I loved the way you developed this commercial as well!
Hahaha thanks a lot man!
Hehe, this is very good!
I like the style and the detail you put in to compensate for lack of colors.
Lipsyncing could use some work though.
Thanks! I was up late coming up with this, so I wasn't as thorough. Gonna try to improve on it for the next one.
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