too much shaking, not enough anticipation and flow.
Keep going though.
This one was better than the sequel!
[+] Great atmosphere
[+] Tron-ish music, love itt!
[+] Color scheme as good
[-] Animation looked flawed in areas
[-] Hard to tell what's going on during the fight scene
Yeah the problem is that I was working on and off this for a while so some parts are pretty dated where I was still trying to get on my feet with the style. To be expected from a pilot but I can totally accept that it looks off in areas, thanks!
The backgrounds are mindblowing, make sure you tell EthanBurnsides that.
Although, I don't like how the V-CAM/Camera moves with every major movement. When I look at it, if you zoom out to a certain distance in a way where you can see both of the characters and not have to move the camera, it will look a lot better in my personal opinion.
Your movements can use some easing towards the end of each one too. Adding on, the abnormally large hulk-hands disturb me, because all of the other body parts are proportionate.
All in all, a fun little movie.
Is this golden.
[ PLOT REVIEW ]
It's a fun little cartoon. Dry humor-I'd call it. It didn't make me laugh, but I certainly couldn't help but smile the whole way through it!
+ Unique style
+ Backgrounds are very nice, fits in with the newgrounds-ie independent animator feel.
+ Your blurs in movement are awesome!
+ You have created a well-developed atmosphere, backgrounds, setting, music, color palette and all!
- Voice acting could be improved. Some of the louder in volume lines appear to be like you're restraining your voice to make yourself quieter to not disturb people in your household. Voice acting must be natural.
- Hands could be improved overall. Try drawing a set of hands for two weeks every single day while studying online how they are shaped. Trust me, it helps!
All in all, 3.5/5 stars!
(Also, did I hear the 'Deez Nuts' vine during the PTSD moment?)
This style is amazing! I love everything about it. But I'm a real fan of "choppy, but smooth" style.
Fantastic! Thanks! Our stuff will be right up your alley then! :)
*voice crack scream*
Love the boiling effect! :D Keep on trucking, Urbs
Agreeing with Jonarock down there as well as that I will like to see more in the future as well. To be brutally honest, the humor never hit me once.
It's more of a children's animation and this wasn't focused to be humours. We've written many other episodes and some have lots of humor. This episode and 2 after this will be more of a "Get to know the characters". Thank you for your review though!
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